Script #1
BENEATH THE ICE
Ext/Day/Dark/Alleyway
Shot: Black screen with the graphic “SOUTHAMPTON, ENGLAND” across the bottom
-The phone connecting sound is heard for 3 rings. Sound of clatter as phone is picked up.
Shot: Establishing shot is an extreme wide shot with KATERINA in the distance. The credits fade in from bottom left and right hand corner.
(KATERINA briskly walks down lengthy alley way. Face contorted in a determined expression with her eye line just above the camera.)
CALL OPPERATOR V.O (Female)
You’ve reached Rossum Corporation’s customer complaint line, how may I be of help?
Shot: Low angle long shot shows legs walk past camera from the right
KATERINA V.O
(Without hesitation and with a strong Russian accent.)
Echo Victor Sierra Tango One One.
Shot: Long shot with KATERINA slightly closer.
CALL OPPERATOR V.O
(Slightly pauses)
Your complaint has been registered.
Shot: Mid shot of bottom half of KATERINA walking past, Mid shot of torso area of KATERINA walking past. Long shot of KATERINA walking toward camera, closer.
-Russian classical music quickly fades in for a few seconds. Loud beep echoes across the phone call.
STANISLAV V.O
Line secure.
Shot: Mid shot of feet and lower calves go past camera shot, Mid shot of from shoulders up go past camera
KATERINA V.O
Assignment complete-target eliminated.
Shot: Long shot of KATERINA walking towards camera. Closer
STANISLAV V.O
Eto právda? (Confirm?)
KATERINA V.O
Da, ser. (Yes, sir)
Shot: Close up of feet walking. Step towards and over camera. Long shot of KATERINA walking, closer. White lettering appears across the bottom of the screen translating the Russian.
STANISLAV V.O
Vui eto mojhetzé sdelat vo vreemya? (Can you proceed?)
Shot: Long shot turns into mid shot as KATERINA gets closer. Then becomes close up.
KATERINA V.O
Da. Ser. (Yes, sir.)
Shot: Wide shot, KATERINA has walked past the camera.
After analysis in class, Katie and I came to realise that this was an incorrect way to lay out our project script. The structure was wrong and we needed to change key parts in order to create a real script.
It is also not complete, the rest of the stage directions and dialogue have yet to be added. However, this is due to our immediate re-write after finding out that it was in-fact incorrect.
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